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I found your amazing work on twitter and itch.io suggestion by minotaur hotel. Gotta say, It was three amazing stories and hope there will be more in the future!

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For some reason when I download it on my Android it won't open the packet. It normally asks to install but doesn't

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It's not an application to install. It is webside game. 

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Good job, the format of several bite-size stories with some limited choices works well. 

There's some minor stretching issues on the selection screen for me, might be an issue with the andrid browser?

I also see there's a drawing of the unicorn on this page, but it doesnt show ingame for me. Also an andrid bug, or is it not in-game?

Hello, thank you for giving the game a try! The unicorn cover/banner at the very beginning has been turned off on mobile, that's why it won't show up. The reason being I couldn't make it appear without breaking the formatting or having the character decently visible.

As for the stretching issues, do you mind sending a screencap? I'm working on some improvements for mobile at the moment, dealing with that would be good.

Thanks again.

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Another super minor nitpick - A chapter in the selection screen seems to be called "meeting an unicorn", where 'an' should be 'a'.

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Hey, good work with the stories. Only had time to give the first two a quick look, but I did find a few mistakes. I'll leave them down below for you to check on your own time:

Dugeon of the accursed sword (pure route)

page 2  "But that's **excatly** when you see it."<-- should be exactly

page 3 In **antecipation**, your tongue plays with your short snout. No use standing around. This is the victor's spoils.<--should be anticipation

page 6 "I warned*,* you, young tapir." <--I think that comma I highlighted is unnecessary-

last page broken image <-- now, this one may be a thing with my own browser, but just in case it isn't, I'm pointing it out. 

I'll let you know if I find anything else. This is a good start though, keep it up.

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Thank you! All fixed. The broken image was a syntax problem with the downloadable version. The changes will be applied in v1.1.